Fiends--Closet Treats-Episode 06Submitted by Paul Elard Cooley on Sat, 03/13/2010 - 12:03 |
Alan and Carolyn deal with Trey's first night away...
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"Closet Treats" episode 06.
Written and performed by Paul Elard Cooley featuring original music written and performed by Andrew Richardson.Share
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scared to go to sleep. thanks.
Poor Alan! You are truly heartless, oh master of fiends! And as if hearing creepy songs and your creepier voice in my nightmares, wasn't bad enough, Now I'll probably be seeing those damned yellow eyes staring at me out of the darkness too. That I can't help but keep coming back for more is surely a testament to your greatness. ..must procure diapers for upcoming 'Treats...
Alan had it coming...
Too many complaints about what a perfect child he is. Too bad he's a character in one of my stories...BWHAHAHAH! Wal-mart has a discount on bulk buys of Pampers, or so I'm told. Go get 'em.
but...
Now I just have so much sympathy for the kid. Dads lost it, Mom's getting close and the only one he really has to talk to scares the crap out of him from inside his own head. ...or under the bed...
Can't wait for the next one!
Sympathy is overrated...Not really
If I managed to succeed in making the characters sympathetic and empathetic, then I succeeded. I love character driven stories and unforunately, most of them involve torturing the shit out of characters that I actually love. Poor little guy. Poor Trey. Poor Carolyn. I feel for them. I love them. And I hate what I'm going do to them, but I'm glad you're identifying with them. Thanks for the comment.